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PIGSTY PEN
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PIG-STY PEN
I’m lost inside my own cotton head
It’s a maze with no way out
And as you pull us towards our death
I feel I’ve stopped going down
I’m going up now, it’s a simple surprise
It’s no nagging passing lie
Please don’t cast me down again
You’re the future, you’re the then
As the night grows longer
Seems like it’ll never end
I feel you crying and weeping
We’re both inside a pig-sty pen
We’re both inside a pig-sty pen
Here come the cows
Watch the farmer share the loot
Sprinklings of misery
My backside, his boot
Starting to talk about things
Is this night coming to a close?
Sitting next to you,
Being able to breathe on you
You send shivers up my spine
You really aren’t a passing lie!
Let’s make sure this stays the same
I want to reach the stars of fame
As the night grows longer
Seems like it’ll never end
I feel you crying and weeping
We’re both inside a pig-sty pen
I love you, the simplest words
I’ve ever had to say
You’re my option and my conclusion
You take my breath away
I’m lost inside my own cotton head
It’s a maze with no way out
And as you pull us towards our death
I feel I’ve stopped going down
I’m going up now, it’s a simple surprise
It’s no nagging passing lie
Please don’t cast me down again
You’re the future, you’re the then
As the night grows longer
Seems like it’ll never end
I feel you crying and weeping
We’re both inside a pig-sty pen
We’re both inside a pig-sty pen
Here come the cows
Watch the farmer share the loot
Sprinklings of misery
My backside, his boot
Starting to talk about things
Is this night coming to a close?
Sitting next to you,
Being able to breathe on you
You send shivers up my spine
You really aren’t a passing lie!
Let’s make sure this stays the same
I want to reach the stars of fame
As the night grows longer
Seems like it’ll never end
I feel you crying and weeping
We’re both inside a pig-sty pen
I love you, the simplest words
I’ve ever had to say
You’re my option and my conclusion
You take my breath away
I quite like this. Advice welcome. There are a few shabby lines. I like the ending most.
Enjoy
Enjoy
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wonderful I love the wording and the way it flows I like this