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PIGSTY PEN

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PIG-STY PEN

I’m lost inside my own cotton head
It’s a maze with no way out
And as you pull us towards our death
I feel I’ve stopped going down

I’m going up now, it’s a simple surprise
It’s no nagging passing lie
Please don’t cast me down again
You’re the future, you’re the then

As the night grows longer
Seems like it’ll never end
I feel you crying and weeping
We’re both inside a pig-sty pen

We’re both inside a pig-sty pen

Here come the cows
Watch the farmer share the loot
Sprinklings of misery
My backside, his boot

Starting to talk about things
Is this night coming to a close?
Sitting next to you,
Being able to breathe on you

You send shivers up my spine
You really aren’t a passing lie!
Let’s make sure this stays the same
I want to reach the stars of fame

As the night grows longer
Seems like it’ll never end
I feel you crying and weeping
We’re both inside a pig-sty pen

I love you, the simplest words
I’ve ever had to say
You’re my option and my conclusion
You take my breath away
I quite like this. Advice welcome. :) There are a few shabby lines. I like the ending most.

Enjoy :D
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Ryu777's avatar
wonderful I love the wording and the way it flows I like this